Reblogged this on ad648afewofmyfavorites and commented:
Sara, nice blog site.. Check mine out if you can.. It’s for a masters class i’m taking at BU. let me know where I can improve it.
I ‘liked’ this and then scrolled down and saw that the photo had cut off ‘sailor’ from the rest of the poem. I know it doesn’t fit the ‘structure’ of a haiku but ending with just ‘wooden sea’ really spins the attention around – the driftwood as petrified flow, the sea as flow petrified …
Either way I am liking your work – it appears straight onto the retina
Talking to the Clouds 
Reblogged this on ad648afewofmyfavorites and commented:
Sara, nice blog site.. Check mine out if you can.. It’s for a masters class i’m taking at BU. let me know where I can improve it.
Thank you for your kind comments. I look forward to checking out your blog!
I ‘liked’ this and then scrolled down and saw that the photo had cut off ‘sailor’ from the rest of the poem. I know it doesn’t fit the ‘structure’ of a haiku but ending with just ‘wooden sea’ really spins the attention around – the driftwood as petrified flow, the sea as flow petrified …
Either way I am liking your work – it appears straight onto the retina
Thank you for the heads up. I think that happened when I changed templates for the website. I hope it is fixed now 🙂