Oh wow. There’s a certain straightforwardness in the choice of imagery that makes it sound so natural and common-sense, and yet, not really. Because their is an evident intelligence (not so common!) in the way the images depict the concept, no more, no less. Such a short poem and yet so potent. I should learn how to do this too. I’m glad I visited!
I love this! Very nice π
Thank you!
Oh wow. There’s a certain straightforwardness in the choice of imagery that makes it sound so natural and common-sense, and yet, not really. Because their is an evident intelligence (not so common!) in the way the images depict the concept, no more, no less. Such a short poem and yet so potent. I should learn how to do this too. I’m glad I visited!
Thank you very much for stopping by and for you comments. They are much appreciated π