torrent churns
(through) green, blue,
lashing upon itself,
reflecting (me) invisible
flow stop crash turn twist
journey ~ day and night,
(lost) shadows, white water
secrets, sun (behind), and
(always) the pull of the
(drowning) water. (shadow
me)
torrent churns
(through) green, blue,
lashing upon itself,
reflecting (me) invisible
flow stop crash turn twist
journey ~ day and night,
(lost) shadows, white water
secrets, sun (behind), and
(always) the pull of the
(drowning) water. (shadow
me)
Talking to the Clouds 
The turmoil we all feel at various times in our life is represented well in you poem.
Thanks!
The pull of the drowning water….I love this line….the enchantment of water 🙂
Thanks so much 🙂
love the image that goes with your poem
Thanks. I think it’s a good self-portrait 😉