On the balcony, overlooking the sea, inside of time,
they drank their tea. Blessed by orange and gold,
the sun set slowly, holding every moment,
hand in hand, a dream set on repeat.
Yesterday came and went, and the ticket remained
on the shelf. She folded up the sunset with the tea,
inside the hands, palm lines underneath time.
Today is forever remembering tomorrow.
Wow…really good…reflective and moving.
Rtk
Thank you!
“Today is forever remembering tomorrow.” I like this line very much 🙂
Thank you very much.
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Time after time your words hit targets I can’t even see – until I read your work!
Thank you.
Thank you so much. I feel the same way about your work 🙂
a dream set on repeat, what a terrific line! Hello Sarah! I hope this finds you well, wonderful to see you still on top form. hugs from Baldy 🙂
Thank you!
Very nice sunset!
Thanks!
I love the picture, I always the sunset and sunrise moment ❤
Thanks, and me, too 🙂
These words are beautiful Sarah, the timeless feel of the eternal cycle captured for a moment in your words and photo. Inside of time they drank their tea, blessed by orange and gold…..this is a truly delicious line 🙂
Thank you so much 😀
Reblogged this on PMJ's Favorite Reblogs and commented:
Beautiful Poem, Beautiful Picture. I’m reblogging this to a new blog I set up just to hold my favorites. This blog is for my own pleasure, but I think others may enjoy the concentration of beautiful work it holds. Thank you for the beauty you share on your blog, Sarah.
Sincerely, Jim
Thank you very much! I appreciate your support and kind words. I will be sure to visit you blog, too. 😀
great line : She folded up the sunset with the tea 🙂
thank you very much 😀
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Great lines and beautiful imagery. Really exquisite!
Thank you so much for your kind words!
I like this poem! The idea of the last line “Today is forever remembering tomorrow” feels fresh, yet familiar to me. It’s hard to explain…
Thanks 🙂
Everything about this post is dreamy and nostalgic. Really great!
thank you very much!