I’m sorry sending the angels was all I could do
as I knelt in the glass and mud.
Spring won’t come this year.
I didn’t see you until you almost
hit the back corner of my car, almost
took me with you, rolling, scraping, across concrete,
flipping, air dirt air dirt, glass, metal, tree –
almost –
I already knew before my car came to rest on the edge.
Smoke began to rise from your truck, and it was all
so close
so close you were to me, to the tree, to right side up and upside down,
to where you were going,
so close. I asked them to be with you,
the angels,
when the other voices yelled, “Step back!”
And today what’s left of your almost –
a tire with a white cross and flowers,
but still,
an angel,
so close.
Beautiful, poignant, so real.
It was very real, too real, and this was written from the heart. Thank you for your kind comment.
Sending angels is the BEST we can do. You were there for that reason.
Your comment means a lot to me, and your words have been staying with me. Thank you.
Thank you for telling me that. We rarely know when our words are fitly spoken. 😉
Indeed a poignant and lovely poem.
Thank you very much, my friend.
I’m so glad that you stopped back by my blog today. Thank you. I had forgotten that I wanted to visit yours and I’m glad I did. I always enjoy finding bloggers who are spiritual. Bloggers who are spiritual and write well….bonus. If this is written from personal experience, I wish you peace Sarah. Actually, I wish you peace either way. ~ Michael
Thank you, and I wish you peace back. Always.
This is quietly gripping.
Thank you very much.
wrenching
it was
Very nice, one of your best I think.
Jim
Thank you very much, Jim
Wow that was really moving. Wonderful peace of writing, brought a tear to my eye.
Thank you for the compliment. It was difficult to write, so it brings some comfort to know that other people can sense the depth of feeling in it. I appreciate it.
I could totally see this happening. What an awful feeling to be in an accident. If this really happened, I wish you peace, and the knowing that your prayers were heard and answered. nobody is ever really alone. it just feels that way sometimes.
Yes, it did really happen. Thank you for your kind wishes, and I do believe we are never alone.
Deeply moving, beautifully written
Thank you very much.
Beautifully touching
Thank you for reading and for you kind comments.
Ah, what a traumatic experience. I am glad you are safe and sad fr the man who did not make it. Your poem is moving.
Thank you very much.
Congratulations, I have nominated you for the “Sunshine Award”. For details please go to http://ronnie-s.com/2014/04/06/sunshine-award-2/ for the details.
Your poetry rocks, Sarah. I can’t wait to read more. (This is a haunting poem.)
This is fine indeed. i’m happy to have found you here
my best to you
john