i fell off the edge of the world
tumbled through time, through
the air you left behind. you flew
away inside of me. I stayed
and cried, my insides
empty runways,
clouds melting into my head
asking why, why I was stilled,
holding the air you left behind
Talking to the Clouds 
Oh that last line defines ‘loneliness and loss’ to me…very power.
thank you!
Magnifique poème, vous êtes une poétesse inspirée – merci!
thank you very much for your kind words – merci!
Very nice. Beautiful words. I like that.
thank you very much
Great poem!
thank you!
beautiful
thank you
Powerful lines, indeed–I must agree that last one sums it up so piercingly.
thank you very much
Powerful words. Very poignant. Well done.
Thank you very much.
Brilliant mood piece, great to read and fantastic picture to go with it. I might only change stilled, to still and omit the comma.
Jim
thank you for your kind words and your suggestions; I think I might agree with you!
Reblogged this on Geo Sans and commented:
a poetic confidant … NaPoWriMo
Thanks so much for the re-blog. I am a big fan of your work.
you’re words
are always inspiring
Sometime loneliness is part of process.
very true
perfect detachment of lines, this works very well–beautiful.
thank you very much
Impressive use of language. I am impressed with your images especially “my insides are empty runways”
thanks…that’s how it feels sometimes, doesn’t it?
simply amazing! 🙂 Loved it!
thank you so much!
Oh yes, I recognize that feeling, I too ‘fell off the edge of the world’ and am still falling, falling. . .
I’m glad it’s not just me 😉
And I thought for many years it was just me. Your words pressed right into my soul memory and I didn’t feel quite so alone anymore. I hope you have fallen into happiness and peace as I have.
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Amazing!
Really gorgeous words. “My insides empty runways.” I know that feeling.