when the sun was still early in the sky
and the waves broke easy near the shore
I waded past knee high white caps into the Atlantic
early summer smiled and so did I
floating through what the sea rolled my way
hours like minutes, until the clock faced sky
began to fill with cloudy hands
the water churned mixing salt and sand
the roll pulled me down the shore, but still I rode
swam harder to keep time with the sea
the sun sank lower, watching me
clouds spread darker, angering the sea
I grew smaller and more tired, floating out the waves
still I stayed in that day
where else would I be?
the tide began to rip and pull at me
drew me out further, where the surf broke high and loud
I dove beneath, let it swirl above
but it all came faster and faster
trying to keep up with the sea
my breath was short and salty
what I had left was low as the falling sun
watching as a breaker swept over me
tossed beneath its turbulent green
I washed up on shore, a piece of driftwood
next wave hit me square, spun me under
pulled me back, so I stayed at the edge and didn’t leave
sun still watching, still waiting, still listening
I was salt and sand and part of the sea
wave after wave weathering me
A beautiful piece of prose-poetry – you paint a vivid and enthralling picture. I really enjoyed this – well written indeed!
thank you very much for your kind words
A most engaging poem.
thanks!
Sarah, you write the most beautiful poetry . . . And the pictures you share are, like you, a gift, your heart to mine . . . Thank you!
You have the kindest words for me, and they are truly appreciated (you don’t know how much!). Thank you!
poem and photo both beautiful and evocative
thank you very much
Wonderful. I have missed your work. I hope you are well 🙂
Thanks, it has been a very, very busy time…I appreciate your thinking of me, my friend 🙂
Beautiful and soothing to the soul!:)
thanks!
love the last two lines especially.
thanks!
What an amazing poem…..I was swept away with you into the salty waves….beautiful
thank you very much, friend
Lovely poem! It reminds me in some ways of the Atlantic waters I grew up near by Lynn Massachusetts
Thank you. I have live near the Atlantic Ocean all of my life and have so many memories connected with it, a constant companion in my years. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and comment 🙂
love how gently you wrote this… like a feather on the wind
thank you very much 🙂